Pitch from jennashaw5
this is my pitch that i presented to my class for feedback on what i could improve. from what they have said i need to plan my locations, i have established a location but not all of them. i also need to make sure i dont copy of the origional video. i dont think i am changing anything after their feedback as it was mainly positive.
this is my pitch that i presented to my class for feedback on what i could improve. from what they have said i need to plan my locations, i have established a location but not all of them. i also need to make sure i dont copy of the origional video. i dont think i am changing anything after their feedback as it was mainly positive.
Jenna
ReplyDeleteYou have provided a basic overview of your project, including your initial ideas for the video, your target audience, distribution etc. Although you say you do not plan to make any changes, as it stands you do need to develop your idea further, particularly the storyline you plan to use.
Gary